Ana Lisa

Wow, that was amazing. But it was the laast stanza: "And it is here I see the rose of my life, my blood its peddles, my body the stem, the ...

I like it, but I would have changed the genre b/c it didn't sound lyrical to me.

I agree with Blondie05998 or somethin like that. IT was really good and i like the flow of the words. I just wanna know what gave you a reason to ...

I was just stating my opinion, and personally I like the name.

You say flab, I think grandma arms.

I like the name April Gray but her power I would change. . . :D

It was in Alexandria, Virginia. My Aunt Kate was watching me and my brother Adam, when my mother died. "Ana, do you mind carrying Adam into the house and getting ...

I really liked the story. But i have a question, is James like a five year old or something cause i got tat type of feelingw when i was reading ...

Umm. . . I'm really sorry about this but i don't like charlie. She's too much of a girlly girl. Which I hate. And if you could can you watch ...

I was moving in with my Aunt Kate and Uncle Stan for the summer, or at least until my mother got out of the hospital. That year I had turned ...

I liked it, the way that you described the anger anliked it, and frustration of the soldier in the war. I really hope that you write more like this one. ...

Like what Mr.Bacon and Roon said, I also think that if you exstend it than it could be a nice poem, but I like it the way it is. It's ...

I really liked it. Your description of how the oceans' waves move and the way they hit the sand made me feel like i was really at the beach or ...